Saturday, November 5, 2011

On the Verge of Breaking

http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1824066-On-the-Verge-of-Breaking   go here for the story. Its not finished but i would love opinions so i know if im going in the right direction.
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  1. JessieNovember 6, 2011 at 7:45 PM

    Yes. You are going in the right direction. After reading it, I want to know more. A good story pulls the reader in like that. :)

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