On the Verge of Breaking

http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1824066-On-the-Verge-of-Breaking   go here for the story. Its not finished but i would love opinions so i know if im going in the right direction.

My pumpkin

Look what i found in the back yard

Hard to explain

What did the damage.

Damage

My Room (after)

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Badge Under Fire

    “I don’t care what you think,” said Meagan, “I want everything you can dig up on Ranaldi, and I want it soon.”
   Shortly after hanging up Meagan pulls into a parking lot of an apartment building that is known for Ranaldi’s boys to hang out in.